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April 15
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Ahem. We see Atari games staked on yellow paper. Nostalgia theme is implied. Those games familiar to onlookers bring back pleasant memories.
1. Three for vision because this is fun. I liked it. A visual aspect (memories) might surface in the onlookers who played these games. Yet, not enough was made of the game names. More on this later.
2. Three for originality because the games might have been stacked according to some theme: monsters, space wars, racing, sports, animals and insects. A missed opportunity to really have some fun with this photo.
2a. Perhaps stacking them to look like the Atari console? Who says the games have to lay all on their sides, flat?
3. Five for technique. Yellow table cover (dominating the picture) suggests sun, happiness and youth and really highlights the black game modules.
4. Three for impact because joy on the surface is portrayed. Although much much more impact might have occurred in this photo. As an archiving photo, I'd give the photo five stars for recording what games you have on hand.
Summary: Fun piece. Could be more creative though.
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