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Shooting in the studio with a medium format camera.

Mamiya
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Atari games

Critiques


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PheebsYeahBaby lol I love your name.
Ahem. We see Atari games staked on yellow paper. Nostalgia theme is implied. Those games familiar to onlookers bring back pleasant memories.

1. Three for vision because this is fun. I liked it. A visual aspect (memories) might surface in the onlookers who played these games. Yet, not enough was made of the game names. More on this later.

2. Three for originality because the games might have been stacked according to some theme: monsters, space wars, racing, sports, animals and insects. A missed opportunity to really have some fun with this photo.

2a. Perhaps stacking them to look like the Atari console? Who says the games have to lay all on their sides, flat?

3. Five for technique. Yellow table cover (dominating the picture) suggests sun, happiness and youth and really highlights the black game modules.

4. Three for impact because joy on the surface is portrayed. Although much much more impact might have occurred in this photo. As an archiving photo, I'd give the photo five stars for recording what games you have on hand.

Summary: Fun piece. Could be more creative though.

Critiques are only opinion. Take what you want; toss everything else.

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:iconniebezpiecznygroszek:
I LOVE ATARI I WANT THOSEEEEE !

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ahh... bollocks!
:icondevilledspud:
its so cute :D i love it
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xox ayla.
:iconpheebsyeahbaby:
:D atari games rule hahaha

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:iconpheebsyeahbaby:
thank you! :D

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:iconkastlekream:
I think that was a fair critique. I liked her suggestions. You should do another picture with these.
:iconpheebsyeahbaby:
i'd like to get in the studio again and give it another go :)

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:iconlamorth-the-seeker:
do they still work? have you tried them with the console?

what mamiya rb rz 645?

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FUJI PHOTO FILM CO., LTD.
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